Design Review
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Title:

Website Mockup Review & Webflow Transition

Engagement:

Uncommon Partners

Client:

Uncommon Partners

Meeting Date:
May 7, 2026
Next Meeting Date:
April 30, 2026
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James Redenbaugh
Peter Wrinch
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Meeting Summary

Mockup Walkthrough

James walked Peter through the latest homepage mockup, noting it's in a good place but still missing the final human touches that will make it feel whole (05:14). The design uses a grounded green hue that Peter responded well to, with James suggesting it could even carry through to the logo treatment (06:15).

Key sections reviewed included the Hollyhock feature area, a "How We Work" section that could benefit from a process visualization or simple animation, a "Trusted By" area to be populated with real organization logos, and the About page with space for personal imagery and the collage concept (06:43). James noted that Peter shouldn't be afraid of white space throughout.

Hero Section Feedback

Peter liked the direction of the hero but suggested making both the circle and horizontal line thicker to give them more presence (10:33). The placeholder copy is close but not final — Peter confirmed he'll refine the words but it shouldn't hold up development.

Imagery Direction

Peter's main reflection was that the design currently feels "a little stark" and would benefit from balancing the Pacific Northwest moodiness with lighter, more luminous imagery (11:00). The meditation photo in the "Our Approach" section stood out as a good example of bringing in light and shadow rather than just moody tones.

James confirmed he generated several of these images with GPT Image 2 and can produce more in that lighter, contrasty style — referencing one image that read as Spanish but carried a similar quality that could translate to the West Coast (13:36).

Photo Collage Concept for About Section

Peter shared a strong creative direction he's been sitting with: rather than a standard corporate headshot, he wants something inspired by 90s album art — a horizontal bar of personal photos spanning life and work, almost like the rectangular layouts in modern photo album builders (14:45). He showed an early exploration done in Claude [tag="claude"] that didn't fully land but pointed in the right direction (16:41).

The plan:

  • Peter will compile ~20 personal photos spanning 30 years into a Google Drive folder
  • Pam will contribute her own selection within a week
  • Peter and Pam are reuniting in person next week for the first time in years and will capture fresh photos together
  • James will bring the collage to life in design once assets arrive

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Insights / Blog Content Strategy

Peter raised the question of how to handle his existing body of writing scattered across the internet (22:40). James recommended collecting them into a simple list with title, description, and category for each piece, which he can then convert into CMS items linking out to their original homes — or pull in fully as blog posts if preferred (23:15).

Peter decided to curate 5–7 of his most resonant pieces rather than pulling everything in, balancing older foundational writing with newer relevant work.

Moving into Webflow

The team agreed it's time to transition the design into Webflow [tag="webflow"] for further refinement (20:04). James will share the current mockup link so Peter can leave feedback on details like font readability (one italic colored heading is hard to read), button contrast, and whether icons should appear on the commitments section. Peter is holding off on icons for now since they don't appear elsewhere on the site, though he floated the idea of the ends-of-circles motif as a potential iconographic element (21:10).

Collaboration Cadence

With Peter unavailable next week, the team agreed to continue asynchronously via text and email [tag="gmail"] rather than scheduling another meeting (25:08).

Action Items

Peter Wrinch

  • Compile ~20 personal photos into a Google Drive folder and coordinate with Pam for her selection (17:42)
  • Capture fresh photos with Pam during their in-person reunion next week (20:04)
  • Review the shared Webflow mockup link and provide feedback on fonts, button readability, and icon decisions (20:53)
  • Refine the hero section copy (19:05)
  • Curate 5–7 key writings with titles, descriptions, and categories for the Insights section (24:04)

James Redenbaugh

  • Share the current mockup link with Peter (24:46)
  • Generate additional imagery balancing Pacific Northwest moodiness with lighter, light-and-shadow imagery (12:53)
  • Thicken the hero circle and horizontal line; fix the hard-to-read italic heading (21:41)
  • Move the design into Webflow and build out the contact page (22:09)
  • Set up CMS structure for the Insights section once Peter delivers content (23:40)
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